That is a hard realization for me. To suddenly see what you considered to be your strength as a potential pitfall can be disheartening to say the least. Of course, the extreme is to avoid descriptive writing altogether, but that too would be a mistake. A beautiful composition has a perfect balance that can draw a reader in and provide a foundation for their own fantastic interpretation. We run into trouble when we get so engrossed in the scenery, the details of the items on shelves and the way shadows flicker across the twilight-kissed leaves in an otherwise transitional scene, that we forget that we are in the midst of a story about our characters.
Have I gone that far? I don't think so. I mean, at least no one has ever mentioned it to me. Upon further meditation, though, I do realize that the second chapter of my current project does have a bit of a problem in areas where I struggled to measure the perfect quantity of detail into the scene. It leads me believe, looking back, that if you have to ask yourself if you are including enough detail, you might just be including a bit too much in some cases. Of course, that's the beauty of rewrites. I know this is an issue now, but I have to focus on moving forward. I will keep notes as I go about things I will want to change on the next revision, but I've got to keep moving ahead.
I guess that's the biggest thing for me -- slowly getting in touch with my own personal writing process. I've said it before, time and time again, I have always had this odd prejudice against rewriting and cutting. I truly expected that I should be able to cough up each story or poem perfectly formed and in the final state. Of course, this caused a lot of tension and a lot of setbacks where I deleted pages upon pages of decent starting material simply because it did not meet my expectations. I have since learned that this starting material is not as bad as I had thought. Sure, it must be sifted and refined, but there are
still rough gems to be found. It is only a fool who tosses these castings, hoping instead to find the perfect diamond or shimmering nugget.